Alone, all alone
I scream and no one hears me
I would smile, but no one sees.
I'm trapped in this hole
The light is fading fast.
I'm tired of lying
of putting on this mask
to mask my feelings
I'm not ok.
Is anyone out there?
Does anyone care?
These tears drip down
and fall to the ground
no hand is there to catch them.
God hear my plea!
My hope is gone.....
Annie, I am here
Every tear
I caught with my heart
I heard every scream
Every plea
still rings in my ears
I am here
to bring back the hope...
http://annie-isnt-ok.deviantart.com/art/Aegri-somnia-52466430
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest (January) by Denierim.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Even though the rather typical style of this one, I like the feelings and thoughts you put to this one. The first stanza just captures you to this story that you created with your words that were rather well selected. The flow is good and brings out the emotions quite well. It could've gone a bit deeper if you ask me, but it works out so well like this also. Good work with this one!
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pretty good, i really liked it. a little, normal though... i mean, maybe im just used to your excellent poetry, but this one seems like about half (exaggeration) of the poetry on AP.
Still its a really good poem.
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