I'm not a wh*re,
No matter what you say,
I'm me and that whom I will continue to be,
That was in the past,
You must not dwel on everything that was last,
Hold your heads to the skies,
But I am not full of lies,
Get your head out of the fxxking clouds,
LISTEN TO ME!!,
You are just part of the crowds,
Not asking,
Just judging...
You don't care,
You only stare,
Into the eyes of depression,
Not really seeing but only looking,
Well look closer,
Closer untill you see the sad girl who always struggles at home,
With family and friends,
Only to find out...
That she is alone, lost, not being belived...
Decived...
*this next line is cedit to the band "Paramore".. "Their song Misery Buisness"*
ONCE A WH*RE YOUR NOTHING MORE!
Please tell me what you think
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=( There's a lot of pure emotion in this poem, and I like how it portrays that so easily. The only thing I really have to say is to try and edit it a bit, cause there are a couple of spelling mistakes and things ^-^ but nicely done
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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lawl. :]
thank you very much. haha yeah. i kiindaaa purely SUK at spelling. haha. proves why im failing LA in skool. pshhh. hahahaha. :] thank you thoughhhhh. ^_^
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Sorry
I'm sorry that you had to hear everything, I will not try to convince you that it is not my fault. I know that you are sick of it and I let you decide on your own, and I LOVE this poem and I love that you said "You must not dwel on everything that was last"...I am truly sorry for the pain this caused you.
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