sweet heart, sugar, my baby doll--
get well soon; just get well at all!
I know it's hard; you need no scares--
but at least you know that someone cares.
Author notes
user: twilight seduction
not: you might not want to read my otehr stuff--I do a LOT of free verse.
"I (Amber Grimsley) hereby allow Mackerth to use my poem for the intended purpose".
A contest entry
- Sick Young Boy Needs a Poem! by mackereth.
2500 points, ended March 31, 2008, 41 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what this makes you feel
Comments
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A very inspiring short piece that is sure to help a friend in need. good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for entering my contest. I like the simplicity and length of this piece, and how the calming background compliments it. Good job, thank you for your support, and good luck in the contest.
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