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Just Keep Swimming

I cried today.
My heart wept so openly i feared the flood would drown me.

But i know how to swim.
And i'll keep swimming.
I'll swim until i no longer have the strength to keep going.
Until i no longer have the heart.
To keep swimming.

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  • Mike Driscoll jnr
    May 4
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    Resistance to the waters that could drown you if you're not careful its real short, but its poignant. To me, that poignancy means more then the length of it. and yes, i'm back.....permanently now, unless another debilitating lack of confidence hits me again, i'm sticking around. xxxxxxxxx Beautiful work, just like you.