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Bandit

Bandit you were my
Friend in dark times.
I remember raising
you from a pup.
my little Yorkshire
terrier ball of endless energy.
you would lick my face
when i would ping your ear.
although i have lost
you i will not forget you.
you were the worlds
greatest puppy.
I love you bandit
my Yorkshire terrier star.

Author notes

this poem is in honor of my late yorkshire bandit the greatest dog in the world whose life ended way to soon for me to be happy with. he was such a ball of energy and fun. I really miss him. May he rest in peace. I want to win silver trophy

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  • Isi
    June 23
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    I am sorry you lost your Bandit, but this is a beautiful tribute to him, and I am sure he can feel your love where he is now.

    Unfortunately this doesn't fit the contest, and I will have to disqualify it.

  • piccola gold member
    June 22
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    seems you got the silver you asked for LOL congrats. Thanks for entering
  • Himitsu
    May 30

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    Spelling-wise, you used "i" instead of "I" and "world" instead of "world's". Otherwise, a very tender, melancholy poem. To have a creature so full of life silenced is indeed heartbreaking. Thank you for your entry.
  • Dear Poet

    Thank you for entering my contest PREWRITES FOR BRONZZE & SILVER TROPHY WINNERS with BANDIT

    Best wishes

    liquid

  • moaner silver member
    May 21

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    awww, poor little fella dieing so young : ( lovely write and very heart felt, good luck in my contest x

  • liduen silver member
    March 16, 2008

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    You obviously cared very much for Bandit and it shows through in your poetry. Good job, but you need to put the option number in the authors notes :

    • liduen silver member
      March 16, 2008
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      ok, thank you. good luck in the contest!

  • Florida Sunshine gold member
    February 24, 2008

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    This is nicely written ~ I think your write ~ can make anyone remember their favorite family pet ~ nice job ~

    Thanks for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you!!!

  • CountryCousin
    January 25, 2008

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    Don't they all.

    Whoops my finger slipped and yes don't they all end too soon. But you have done a very good job of relating to us how you feel.

  • CountryCousin
    January 25, 2008
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    dON


  • CountryCousin
    January 25, 2008
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    dON


  • Melodies gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    Ah, what a fine poem, beautifully penned right from your loving heart. Really precious lines and images.


  • BellaD
    January 22, 2008

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    Sweet tribute!

    This was a touching poem about your Yorkshire terrier. Favorite part: you would lick my face
    when i would ping your ear.
    Thank you for sharing this.
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