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Pity

Survive only on joy,
no more than the smiles wanted.
A tear is cared for only by yourself.
Pity yourself.

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Laugh, and the world laughs with you; weep, and you weep alone.
English Proverb

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 6, 2008

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    Not sure about the repetitiveness but apart from that - an intriguing and fluent piece.
    Thanks for entering,


  • Purplemoondoll
    January 24, 2008
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    Yes I like this

    Short and poignant - love this all the way - nice work...