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Love Strong Enough

I cried inside as I saw the first welt of My cane burn red
On the second My heart screamed stop, please no more
Then the final stroke, and the rattan drops from My hand

angel of Mine, come back to Me, holding tight, My love for you secure.

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For My angel, with love always

in answer to http://allpoetry.com/poem/3834519

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  • Tattboyspet
    January 22, 2008

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    As I told monkey, I feel as though I am intruding, so I shall add my claps and leave ... ~curtsey~


    • Corvus Corone
      January 23, 2008

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      pet never are you intruding I choose to live this way and very openly. One to save My neck as in the past I have faced accusations from the narrow minded jerks who see BDSM and D/s as abusive and not about love and two some of the narrow minds actually learn well possibly one can only hope

      Jem x


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 22, 2008

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    Aww Jems M'Lady i know it hurts You as well as me and it hurts me more inside coz im making You hurt me...but i know You only do it with love and coz i deserve it ...im so glad we have the hugs after ....

    i love You so much M'Lady

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx

    • Corvus Corone
      January 22, 2008
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      Couldn't do this if there was no love and compassion after My angel, and no matter what there will always be that.

      Love you so very much Mine

      Jem xxxxxxx