A frozen crystal bought,
and willing to travel the death road.
It only lives for the heartbreak,
for it defines.
Author notes
An old man in love is like a flower in winter.
~Portuguese Proverb
A contest entry
- [ONE] by Naridill.
390 points, ended February 3, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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The ending was stark, lamenting and beautiful. You drove through this nicely.
Thanks for entering,

