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Frozen

A frozen crystal bought,
and willing to travel the death road.
It only lives for the heartbreak,
for it defines.

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An old man in love is like a flower in winter.
~Portuguese Proverb

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  • Naridill gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    The ending was stark, lamenting and beautiful. You drove through this nicely.

    Thanks for entering,