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Diffinitive Complex

I am washing away the sin.
She says
As she's ripping apart his skin.
he bled.

She pushed him down
as he choked to breathe,
Spewing words
That mutate and bleed

I
need
help
He screamed.

Bang to the head.
He bled to death.
Mine
Carved across his chest.

He drowned in her blood.
With a hole in her head.

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