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Romeo and Juliet

I know I'm not as pretty or clever I should be
that fairy tails don't come true, I have been told
and then came you
My Romeo, on his white horse, riding the wind
with grace, as beautiful as a man can be

This Romeo shall move on too
and so you shall do
I know this, for I am here to see the tears
I know this, for I ache in loneliness

Not fit to the image as I should, I'm out of the picture
A rose by any name remains a rose
and even if you call me pretty I do not change
My Romeo shall move on to someone like him

Romeo and Juliet will forever be
the love they share in time will never change
Too bad that Juliet was not me

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  • disenchanted-vampire
    January 23, 2008
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    Aww. This is really sad, albeit beautifully written still.

    • Latradi
      January 24, 2008
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      Aww you're too kind... Thank you very much..


  • paullallady silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    What a sad poem. About a love found
    and then a love lost. This feeling
    of nothing good lasts forever. good
    job on this poem.

    • Latradi
      January 23, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked my piece.. it is sad indeed...