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Distance

This love that we share I know it shouldn't be.
But I can't help but loving that it's just you and me.
Though you also love another,
I can't help but wonder.
If this is truly meant to be.
This love is forbidden,
It is not allowed.
But we smile at each other from the distance of the crowd.
You really love me,
Oh I hope that it's true.
Because I really, Yes I really love you.

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  • alaskanamber
    February 11, 2008

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    Love is so uncertain at times. Great entry. A spelling error, but I can't help noticing those. An OCD judge. Great huh? Good luck.