The sorrow in my big blue eyes.
Is so deepit will make you want to cry.
But I keep my sorrow and pain in disguise.
That most wouldn't recognise it even if they tried.
Only someone who truly cares can sence the sorrow inside.
The happiness was real that I used to show.
Then sorrow came like the rain.
Now I must hide my pain.
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 9a Feelings by cricketjeff.
1500 points, ended January 29, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i loved it your sucha good writer!.. i named the red and yellow cat spyro and the black one cupcake and the blue one indigo .. dont ask how i remember that haha..and for a dream it was a PAINFUL experiance!!p.s. im just learning how to use this trhing .. and i just realized how dumb i was to not use storywrite .. im a stupid head.
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Thank you for your heart felt entry in our contest. Please join us in the final contest of the series. New writes only, pre-writes will be DQ'd.
All the best
Sue and Jeff
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