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Teacher, Teacher

Teacher, teacher,
You don't understand,
When you didn't pick me,
I felt more than just betrayal.

It's so obvious that you picked the ones,
The ones that you think will go far,
And I wasn't one of them...why?
I guess you don't think very highly of me. 

You love them,
You praise them,
You make it clear,
Now, I feel as though you cringe when you see me.

When you picked all of the kids,
It was more than just a pick.
You've crashed my esteem.
You know, I didn't even like the book,
That the project was going to be on.

But that is not the point. 

Author notes

This is about the ivory ela extra project. I am not this sad, but i felt that this would be a good thing to write about for the prompt in the contest. I mean, i can't exactly write a love poem to our ivory teachers....could I?

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  • jewlinz
    January 23, 2008
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    INTeResting I wonder what momo and dad would say............
    Sister
    Lindsay


  • Periwinkle Blue
    January 22, 2008

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    Hey, this poem is here two times, and I am sure that must be a mistake... has happened to me, too. Anyhow, this poem is really FINE and I like your thinking. Teachers should be fair and unbiased, but what the heck.


  • StarIlluminated
    January 22, 2008

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    Awww, I'm sorry Kathryn! I'm pretty sure i know what this is, not the fine details, but the overall statement. This is very good!

    Illuminated *KT*


  • omg-its-sara
    January 22, 2008
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    Ummm... you entered this poem twice?

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