spring sat upon the
sun
a jasmine rose
sank the ocean
red
with
heartbeat soft
he took me by suprise
In a list
A contest entry
- ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oo it expressing a picture of how I felt when he took me by a suprise. I pictured like it was spring day beautiful and like the color that changes in the ocean when this jasmine rose fell in was how he took me by suprised with his kiss that changed my heart so then like the ocean as it make ripples like my heart was shaken as my heart pounded... or it mean other things. It was for a short contest so I had to think fast. hope you enjoy it and my many others
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Beautiful and lovely work here my friend!
Good luck to you with this one in
the contest and keep it up!
Jeremy0826 -
Beautiful!!!! I love it
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thank you!!
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