He's a traveling man on a journey to go.
He'll travel by foot in rain, sleet or snow.
The elements can't hinder this man on a quest.
The search for his soul is what he does best.
His spirit is resurrected with the things that he sees.
From the flowers that bloom to the birds in the trees.
From the raindrops that fall upon his head.
To the sun that shines a beautiful red.
From the leaves that change colors on an autumns day.
To the moles who couldn't chase their shadows away.
From the snowflakes that sparkle as they fall from the sky.
To the raven who heads south as it continues to fly.
Just a few of the things that enrich his being.
Enlighten his spirit because of the things he's seeing.
In a list
A contest entry
- LIGHT AND HAPPY by lindaburns.
1400 points, ended February 18, 2008, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Butterflies Flutter By by whispernthedark.
675 points, ended May 17, 2008, 26 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice!
Good luck in my contest!
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beautiful....and it shows how man absorbs energy from nature and her beautiful creations...congrats on the trophy..the smooth flow of words is appreciable
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Great flow, nice imagery. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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Nice imagery, thank you for entering.
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filled with lovely images. thank you for your entry.
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Really nice! I liked it! It's...hm...I don't know. But don't worry, that's a good thing! At least...coming from me. You left me pretty much speechless! Good work!And good luck in the contest!
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VERY NICE!!
I really love this poem. It feels so.. searching. Very nice.
My favorite line was: The search for his soul is what he does best. GREAT line.
Good luck in this contest! oh.. and which family member did u want to be? -
i love this poem its beautiful
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Looks like we may walk the same path, brother. It's nice to see a likeminded man on this journey too. Write on. One.
Dez
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Can I take this journey with ya my dear brother? A beautiful poem that flows so gracefully.
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I like it. Your poem reads smoothly enough and the rhymes aren’t forced. 
You form complete thoughts and tell a story worth reading. Just what I asked for. Thank you for entering my contest.
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very well written good job i immensely enjoyed this poem thank you so much for entering my contest XD
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My Brother........
You truly are a master of the rhyme....You do it so beautifully and effortlessly....This was so lovely to read and I find that I would like to travel with this man oh his journey!!
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I'd like to take that journey myself... have my spirit enlightened!!
This was so lovely!!!
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