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To My Future Baby

What would you think
If you saw me today
What would you do
What would you say?

Would you smile
And be delighted
Or frown and cry
And feel incredibly slighted?

Would you be proud
To say that's my mother
Or would you be ashamed
And wish I was another?

Baby, I'm trying
To give you the best
Though you're not real yet
I hope you'll be impressed

My future child
I hope you'll love me
That you'll love your mother
Once you are conceived.

Please tell me what you think

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  • madgirlslovesong
    January 22, 2008

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    hey, that's really good! the only part that i would change is that at the end "me" and "concieved" are more of a slant rhyme while the rest is exact rhyme (go lit devices and honor's english)