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Sorry

I am sorry when you told me I was beautiful
I didn't see it

I am sorry when you told me I wasn't fat
I refused to believe it

When I got on that scale today
And saw that I was one pound away
From what I have to be for the Navy

My eyes popped open
And my jaw really dropped

It brought me back to when you told me
I am beautiful
And I am not fat

Author notes

This poem was not meant to have a scheme... so don't tell me that there is no scheme, but I appreciate any other comments! Love ya'll! and thanks for reading!

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