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1995

the heat of your breath
the pouring sweat
the chills on your neck
the smell of your flesh
the bones of your knuckle
so perfectly subtle
the taste of your kiss
the magnificant bliss
the curve of your eyes
the man lying behind

your memory forever...etched into my mind...

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  • BluRosePoet8488
    January 22, 2008

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    WOW! I like this! That last line really says it all... Gone... but not forgotten.
    There is such emotion and life to this poem. Keep the ink flowing, my friend. Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~