Until the end of time,
On you I値l spend every dime.
Until the end of time, I would use up every reason to why I love you.
Until the end of time, I値l write you all kinds of symphonies,
Telling you how much you mean to me.
Until the end of time, I値l have all I ever wanted,
Since the only thing I could ever want is your love.
Until the end of time,
We値l dance under the stars so many ways imaginable,
That if the world ended, we壇 be both distracted in each other to care.
Until the end of time, we would live our lives in bliss,
So when it is the end of our lives as we know it, we would never miss them.
Until the end of time, we値l continue to love and care for each other,
Almost as if we were brothers.
Until the end of time, we値l watch our families grow in wisdom and in harmony and prosperity.
Until the end of time, I値l never stop loving you,
No matter what foolish thing you do.
Until the end of time, we値l always remain husband and wife.
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very passionate
love this..it is a reaffirming of your love..so romantic..thanx so much for sharing..namaste..
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A beautiful testiment to LOVE! Wonderful sentiments...thank you for the entry and bes of luck!!!
Az -
This poem definately radiates the feelings you have for that very special person. I'm not really into too much repetition, and I think the repetition of 'until the end of time' takes away from the strength of this piece.
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck.
Leander -
I really liked this. I like the thought that the love never ends.
Until the end of time, we’ll continue to love and care for each other,
'Almost as if we were brothers.
Until the end of time, we’ll watch our families grow in wisdom and in harmony and prosperity.
Until the end of time, I’ll never stop loving you,'
Thank you for entering my contest, Cathy
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This poem was a wedding anniversary gift for my grandparents, and that's what inspired me to write it. Also I got the title idea from Justin Timberlakes song 'Until the end of time.'
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