worried days and
sleepless nights
wondering how
wondering why
we ended up
this way
worrying
wondering
do they know?
should they know?
ive denied
ive cried
for so long
but this is wrong
deny no more
i cant deal with
this anymore
no more secrets
in the night
no more stares
during the day
done hiding
done crying
i love you
but goodbye
Author notes
this is just for a guy......
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Very sad poem. A lot of us readers have felt the same, and by this, it helps us relate more to what you speak and helps us understand the poem a little better. Nicely written.
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good
this is deep
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