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Gripping Galaxies

I want to hold galaxies in my hands
And thread the strands of starlight through my fingers
I want to bathe in the moondust
I want to scream without a sound
I want to hold galaxies in my hands
Like the ones I see in your eyes when I’m around

I want to feel the love of Venus against my cheek
And see the rusted dust of Mars on my hands
I want to drift on Saturn’s rings
And take your soul as it drifts to sand

I want to hold galaxies in my hands
The kind centered on your heart
And lace the breath of love within your universe
So we’ll never be apart

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  • Cidney Noir
    June 2, 2008
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    Oooooh, this is awesome!

    Am I weird for thinking this could be turned into a song? 8D


  • J J Aco
    January 23, 2008

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    Aw, that was beautiful. I can see this becoming a classic. This poem is full of win Angiela. A beautiful picture has been painted and all I can say is...

    aww how cute