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Sweet Potato Pie

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My specialty is sweet potato pie,
smooth, moist and so  delicious.
Melts in the mouth with each bite,
spending a tingle down the spine.

Will leave you licking your lips,
the smell imprinted on your mind.
A flavor that will make your toes curl,
left with an everlasting hunger for more.

Some like it hot, right out the oven,
with a little whipped cream on top.
The way to a mans heart, great cooking,
I know my way around the kitchen.

Any guys want to come over,
and try a slice or maybe two?
Let the essence rain on your soul,
become addicted to my sweet potato pie.

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Every Girl should have their own special recipe.

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  • Sparow
    April 8
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    sounds yummmmmm....who could resist....


  • Jamaica
    January 28, 2008

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    Well I'm starving right now sweet heart

    This is very interesting from the begining to the end shorty. The metaphors to my out of this planet and into a fantasy land of my own thought. This was very enjoyable lil mama I love it.


  • natchstucco
    January 26, 2008

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    Lol. so that is what you call it. hmmm. There is a new one now for me. I like this write. I do like the whipped cream. heh heh. pour a little chocalate sauce on there too...


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    You go girlfriend LoL
    I love this...

    " Some like it hot, right out the oven,
    with a little whipped cream on top "

    Be careful someone just may knock your door down.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Great Cthulhu
    January 24, 2008

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    Yes...

    A woman that can cook is a most wonderful delight. Especially when she cooks you that special treat! You got me all riled up for a slice of pie (my favorite is pumpkin!) But for a splendid turn, find a guy that can cook too! (especially breakfast, ummm, grits...) Tell ya what, you make me some pie and I'll cook breakfast in the morning.....


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    I do love pie!!!!! Besides having a special recipe, it has to be good for the essence of it to rain on one's soul. Mhmmmmmmmmmmmmm, mhmmmmmmmmmmmmm way better than good (had to make sure my statement differentiate from Campbell's Soups slogan-lol).

    Ted E


  • jcat gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    How right you are!!! Every girl should have a special recipe.....This was awesome and I love the double meaning you have going on here. And the picture is spot on!! Nothing better than a man addicted


  • onesugar gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Sounds like more than pie he is happy with

    it's some sweet potato pie you've got for it to be so spine tingling and toe curling.

    I enjoyed this rain.

    ~sugar~


  • Mykeee
    January 22, 2008

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    O yeah!!! a big bite, licking my lips, dripping slightly from the corners. But You giving supplying that warm scrumptious Pie- Yes loved it like U knew I would


    • raingoddess gold member
      January 24, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks Michael, for the wonderful review, for I give you all you want and more, I do know how you love sweet potato pie, LOL. Hey you can even have seconds Baby.

      raingoddess


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    I loved this. The picture really said so much and your words really makes the reader think about what you are really talking about... Great job with this..
    Soulful Woman


  • Ephiphany
    January 22, 2008

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    lol

    Ok...got 'cha I love this, as you said I would btw...I loved sweet potato pie that is where I got this butt and hips from great Southern Prompt sis...just lovely

    Phiff


  • ennovy silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    Looks like to me that gal can cook and he has a pleasing look on his face. Nice pic but metaphoricly speaking I bet she does have good pie. Well it's tingling spines, and curling toes...sound real sexy...such wonderful imagery..write ON...novy


    • raingoddess gold member
      January 22, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks I hope that get my metaphor, but if not oh well.

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