My specialty is sweet potato pie,
smooth, moist and so delicious.
Melts in the mouth with each bite,
spending a tingle down the spine.
Will leave you licking your lips,
the smell imprinted on your mind.
A flavor that will make your toes curl,
left with an everlasting hunger for more.
Some like it hot, right out the oven,
with a little whipped cream on top.
The way to a mans heart, great cooking,
I know my way around the kitchen.
Any guys want to come over,
and try a slice or maybe two?
Let the essence rain on your soul,
become addicted to my sweet potato pie.
Author notes
Every Girl should have their own special recipe.
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sounds yummmmmm....who could resist....
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Well I'm starving right now sweet heart
This is very interesting from the begining to the end shorty. The metaphors to my out of this planet and into a fantasy land of my own thought. This was very enjoyable lil mama I love it.

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Lol. so that is what you call it. hmmm. There is a new one now for me. I like this write. I do like the whipped cream. heh heh. pour a little chocalate sauce on there too...


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You go girlfriend LoL
I love this...
" Some like it hot, right out the oven,
with a little whipped cream on top "
Be careful someone just may knock your door down.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Yes...
A woman that can cook is a most wonderful delight. Especially when she cooks you that special treat! You got me all riled up for a slice of pie (my favorite is pumpkin!) But for a splendid turn, find a guy that can cook too! (especially breakfast, ummm, grits...) Tell ya what, you make me some pie and I'll cook breakfast in the morning.....

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I do love pie!!!!! Besides having a special recipe, it has to be good for the essence of it to rain on one's soul. Mhmmmmmmmmmmmmm, mhmmmmmmmmmmmmm way better than good (had to make sure my statement differentiate from Campbell's Soups slogan-lol).

Ted E

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How right you are!!! Every girl should have a special recipe.....This was awesome and I love the double meaning you have going on here. And the picture is spot on!!
Nothing better than a man addicted


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Sounds like more than pie he is happy with
it's some sweet potato pie you've got for it to be so spine tingling and toe curling.
I enjoyed this rain.
~sugar~


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O yeah!!! a big bite, licking my lips, dripping slightly from the corners. But You giving supplying that warm scrumptious Pie- Yes loved it like U knew I would


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Thanks Michael, for the wonderful review, for I give you all you want and more, I do know how you love sweet potato pie, LOL. Hey you can even have seconds Baby.
raingoddess
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I loved this. The picture really said so much and your words really makes the reader think about what you are really talking about... Great job with this..
Soulful Woman

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lol
Ok...got 'cha
I love this, as you said I would
btw...I loved sweet potato pie that is where I got this butt and hips from
great Southern Prompt sis...just lovely 
Phiff


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Thanks
Thanks Sis, knew you would like it.
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Looks like to me that gal can cook and he has a pleasing look on his face. Nice pic but metaphoricly speaking I bet she does have good pie. Well it's tingling spines, and curling toes...sound real sexy...such wonderful imagery..write ON...
novy


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Thanks
Thanks I hope that get my metaphor, but if not oh well.
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