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Heavenly Experience

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With arms around each other
and our bodies intertwined
tasting each others'  kisses
savoring each other as if sipping succulent wine

 

We gaze into each others ' eyes
with the look of love we cannot hide
I can feel your eyes upon me

making my soul come alive !

I hear a melody of angels
as we make passionate love;

they're singing in my heart
singing songs of our making love. .

Love songs created by angels;
describing our love and desire...

They're singing songs in heavenly voices
describing our passionate  fire 


Our hearts and souls come to life
as this is spiritual; heavenly...our blending

yes, Heaven smiles down upon us

as we make love never ending

 

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...I've never thought of making love as being a holy thing, until ...Unknown

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  • tawk gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    Wow what a beautiful and sensual and passionate write! Congrats on the Silver well deserved I so enjoyed reading. Amazing in everyway!

  • Threespoetry
    March 19, 2008

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    I Really like the imagery of this poem. It talks about the source of Life to me, and where it is conceived from


  • moluv10
    March 13, 2008

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    Wow! this is outstanding! I love the imagery and flow of this wonderful piece. Congrats on the silver! I've never thought of making love as being holy until...I read this! Excellent work!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    March 10, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    Reaches inside and pulls a deep loving sigh from the heart O' my this is just beautiful my sweet friend I am thrilled to see it has won niaish so much for sharing with me


  • Desire gold member
    February 25, 2008

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    Wow!!

    How did I miss this one
    Beautiful images and energy woven throughout this verse penned
    Tugs at the Heartstrings
    Just Love this!!
    and that font too

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    February 20, 2008

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    Excellent!

    Sandy
    Wow!!! This is a sensual Masterpiece
    Your words soar from the pages and show love and romance.*sigh*
    Great first stanza with a final brilliant stanza that really brings this piece home...

    "With arms around each other
    and our bodies intertwined
    tasting each others' kisses
    savoring each other as if sipping succulent wine...

    Our hearts and souls come to life
    as this is spiritual; heavenly...our blending
    yes, Heaven smiles down upon us
    as we make love never ending"

    Poetic Marvel
    I'm in awe of your talents.
    Congrads on the shiny Silver
    WELL DESERVED

    ~David~






  • luckynsincere
    February 19, 2008

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    simply divine! Your words always hold such tenderness. That well you draw your ink from is ohhhh so passionate!! Well done! Congrats on your silver trophy! Well deserved!

    Mel


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    Beautifully Inscribed!

    I see this contest was right down your muse!
    What a wonderfully weaved piece filled with so much light~
    Thanks for sharing sis, I'm glad you were placed within this race.
    Congrates on the silver, keep up the great works!


    Brother Timothy

  • June-bug
    February 10, 2008

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    very tastefully done. Flowed wonderfully and your words describe the vast difference between making love and having sex. Congrads on teh silver!


  • Arkbear gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Hi Sandy ~

    I think what I like most about this write, is that it does not feel like sex.....it has a real feeling of sensuality to it.....and fine love making which I could feel throughout the entire write ~

     

    I would go back and close up some extra spaces you have hanging around.....but other than that, a beautiful read with calming brush stroke of your quill ~

     

    Lovely, and congrats to you on the Silver....well earned,

     

    Bear ~


  • And Hyetal
    January 24, 2008

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    You wrote this beautifully! Everything just flowed and it became just one wonderful love song.

    Amazing write very deserving of a silver!

    ~Cassie


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 23, 2008

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    Our hearts and souls come to life
    as this is spiritual; heavenly...our blending

    yes, Heaven smiles down upon us

    as we make love never ending

    Well I must agree that this is great write..well done...





  • tawk gold member
    January 22, 2008
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    Such passion and love within your beautiful write. This is just amazing I so enjoyed reading


  • tomisb
    January 22, 2008

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    Touch and passion as a choir of joy about spiritual surrender. My, my Done very well with out being overly serious. Fun to read.
    Love, Tom B.


  • penman gold member
    January 22, 2008
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    Excellent

    Oh my so sensual and well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • PureRomance
    January 22, 2008

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    This is a very beautiful poem. You did a fabulous job with this marvelous piece. Best wishes to you in the contest. This poem was absolutely amazing. I hope you win this contest. It deserves too.


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 22, 2008

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    my dear Sis your passion and love exudes between the two of you. You have truly been heavenly blessed and may each new day bring you both closer together towards whatever the future may hold as you envelope each others spirit in infinite love. many loving blessings always xxxx


  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    Good write here

    And yes love is a holy thing if only experienced through matrimony where promise joins two throguh Christ and the love is caried till the ned until life is renewed


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    beautiful and filled with emotion that only love can bring....Great job Sis

    Lynda

  • Liquid memories
    January 22, 2008

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    excellent presentation of loving between tweo lovers. success inthe contest.


  • CherryOnTop
    January 22, 2008

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    So gorgeous and definetly heavenly. You have wooven more magic here.

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