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The Tide

On the oceanside
We could hear the tide
Rolling in as we dine
On seafood and wine

I can't tell you how
Much this means to me
The oceantide---
With the sunset
Shades of Orange--and red

I'd lay you to sleep
As I softly weep
Your beauty as great as the tide
If it could only stay this way
That would be just fine

But I know it can never be
And I cried so heavily
For this is all just a dream you see
When I awake I will cry

On the oceanside
We could hear the tide
Rolling in as we dine
On seafood and wine

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  • Indeed
    January 22, 2008

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    this one is so pansy-ish... it seriously reminds me of that one movie bedazzled, when he turns sensitive.... and he's crying at the sunset.