Pax and Ping, your barks do sing,
You darling puppies spark the day!
Cute antics fill my life with joy
"They're so cute!" my friends all say.
From morning's light till late at night,
I love your little doggy tricks.
Precious puppies, you're so fine...
you show your love with doggy licks.
I will not choose these chewed-up shoes,
but you'll soon earn my hugs.
Your scampers bring such wonderment...
you've ruined all my rugs!
A contest entry
- Peace and Puppies by BellaD.
600 points, ended January 23, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, I used to have a dog, he was very fat, now I am very fat for I ate him. A good poem.
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Sweet!
This is so cute and a delight to read. Thank you for your entry. -
HAHA!! Loved the ending, and I am sure these adorable puppies have been forgiven.
Your poem gave me a warm glow... smiles written all the way through. 
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