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Alone

All alone in this world of pain
With misery waiting at every corner
I walk this lonely road

All alone in this castle called life
All dark & dead
I walk in the silence of my foot steps

Alone with no one around
My shadow is my only companion
My shadow’s hearts is the only thing that beats

In the dark I await for you
But I die in the silence of the dark
The moon is my only light

And to survive this path
I make friends with the darkness

Whoever shall be found
Without the soul for getting done
Must stand in face the endless hell
Or rot inside the darkness’s shell

I walk this empty path
In my lonely dark castle

That is how u left me
All alone in this world of pain

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    wow this is amazing great choice of words and such emotions felt through it, wonderful and lovely poem =)


  • Pureisolation
    January 22, 2008

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    thank you for writing this poem. I really like your choice of words on alot of this, I can really realate to it. theres no specific part that i love most because i love all of it...thank for for sharing this poem.