ODE TO A MOP
Oh long, slim elegant useful implement
To hold you brings me warm contentment
As we glide hygienically across my grubby floor
Lifting dirt and leaving shine, I couldn’t ask for more
And at close of day in soft lamplight glowing
My floor reflects the glow I’m feeling
As I sit in peace my mind relaxing
Unwinding from my day so taxing
And sometimes in the depth of night
In darkness deep, deprived of light
I think of you in your closet lonely
And I know it’s you and just you only
That calms me, chills me, keeps me sane
As I wash my floors dirt down the drain
A contest entry
- Rhymed prewrites only ... by ecrivain01.
750 points, ended November 14, 2008, 61 entries
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Comments
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This is a spectacular piece! It is very different and I enjoy that alot! Being happy because of ones mop is very amusing and very satisfying I can imagine.
To make things clean when they were once dirty can bring a smile to anyone's face
Thank you for entering this! Best of luck! -
No joke that was afrigginmzing!! It made me smile! Alot
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Cute...
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