If you happen to roam into the woods
there, you will see a magical surprise,
Fairies dance, elves and wizards sing
you will not believe your ears and eyes.
The sun brightly shines above their heads
in the most clear azure of skies,
sitting beneath the shade of the trees
they will all see you walking by.
The laughter of children, will loudly be heard
inside you, happy emotions, will be stirred.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.22/2008
Author notes
Thank you for the inspiration.
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This is cute, dreamy and beautiful. I enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest. Keep on writing and good luck.
Nooni
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Greta poem with great descriptions. The woods indeed has a magical essence that flows within it. Great entry and good luck.
*peace*
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A good title. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Nice depth of feeling. Good descriptives, word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. A lilting piece. Thank you for your entry.
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Nicely written. There is something magical in the woods. Way to bring out those images for us to enjoy. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Now you made me want to go into the woods...so sad I have to work
But reading this almost feels if I was there...It made me feel happy
Great work here
XXJeannette
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This is a great take on the picture. Great write. Good luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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A beautiful magical walk in the woods. Fairies and such to be noted by and hopefully THEY will accept us as we stroll. Good luck in this contest.
Lady D
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