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 You show me these true shades                                                            

that beat from so far within                 

                            Because I am not interested

                                                                      in the color of your skin

                                       We're all created equal, Each~

a personal touch to share       

and not one shall be better                               

or treat another unfair                                                                      

Racial slurs only bring anger                             

no one ever wins that fight

                          but it will damage the soul

                                                                  for "We know it's not right!"

                           Now is it not so important

why hate fills ones heart?           

Maybe there was no love                                        

that might play a big part                                                                 

Reach way down deep inside                            

       tell me 'What do you see...    

                                   Just another poor follower

                                                               or one that belives to be free?

                             We all have our personal path

       that eventually shall walk               

you must lay it out carefully                                  

so when it is your turn to talk                                                           

Try to see ~Beauty~ in all life                              

that subsides upon this earth

                             give praise to be with so many

                                                         different angels since your birth

 

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Contest PIF ~ Themed STOP RACISM. by Sulfane

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 24, 2008

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    Beautiful and scribed with passion and such power. Your words speak for one and all but mostly yourself.

    Thanks for entering,


  • daisybee
    January 22, 2008

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    this was a beautiful message of equality-and love.
    Try to see ~Beauty~ in all life

    that subsides upon this earth

    give praise to be with so many

    different angels since your birth
    these were glorious words-words to cherish and live by. Thank you for sharing such positive power with us.



  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    Most powerfully written with an awesome message!
    If only we would become "color blind" as our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ was
    A wonderful sharing this is!
    Wishing you all the best in this contest!!!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 22, 2008

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    I am so touched by the wisdom flowing from your golden pen...if all would read maybe some would understand. Beneath that color the blood all runs red Thank you my brother for sharing you with me


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 22, 2008

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    this my friend is a strong strong poem and i applaud you for it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.

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