You and I, together forever.
That is how I feel it should be.
Yet, I've hardly known you a month.
Sadly, the fates conspire, you and I, must expire.
So as I take my leave, I bid your farewell; and Godspeed.
A contest entry
- Simplicity of Goodbye by Darianna.
800 points, ended February 8, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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awww so sad. but wonderful write.
great job!
good luck in the contest
stephanie -
I can hardly sit here and question "only a month???" When my husband and I knew we were meant to be after meeting properly for the first time. Shame that the fates should conspire against you
I loved the rhyming of conspire and expire. Seemed quite effortless. The poem flowed nicely also, there didn't seem to be any stumbling points either.
Thankyou for entering my contest, good luck!
Dari xxx
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