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As I Remember

Hands of silk
caressed each curve
igniting within me
every nerve.

Like a harp each string
so delicately strummed
together rhythmically we swayed
to heartbeats drum.

Upon shores of resonant passion
we ebbed and flowed
as two seas joined
on sunset's ocean we glowed.

Pressed together so close
pulses beat one tune
as satin to silk
we touched elation's moon.

Oh how I yearn
for what should have been forever
now memories are all I have
of that time together.






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  • knot2tangled
    January 29, 2008

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    Beautiful rhyme!

    Quite a piece of love poetry with delicate touches of warmth & ability to enhale your words.
    Loved the read.
    Thanks for entering your poem.

    Knot


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    the imagery in this is so gorgous gran it really allows the reader to feel the softness of this affectionate piece. best of luck


  • Tarja
    January 22, 2008

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    The imagery in this was just exquisite. Though the flow was a bit choppy I did think the rhyming and passion in this were excellent. Great job and good luck.

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    This is beautiful, you always manage to stike that love chord within us all with these beautiful writes, such gentle soft love, just what I would expect from such a beautiful heart

    Karen