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Mystic Well Spring

Candle lights glow & flicker
scents mingle linger
to traipse away
winters wooden feet sway

Deepened breaths claim, remain,
single thoughts loiter, sustain,
motivative & meditative perhaps regain
the mystic well spring once again


Lee Taylor
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1/22/08

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  • MargaretG
    January 22, 2008

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    I love the assonance and rhyme you have used, this sounds terrific out loud. I think I have to spend more time in this attitude, and let distractions float away. Cheers!