You kissed her.
My love,
Can I take it back?
Author notes
written for a 10 word contest.
A contest entry
- Got ten words? by Naridill.
430 points, ended January 24, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lamenting kisses and pain, very intriguing and your words, though simple, are very powerful.
Thanks for entering,
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You really managed to capture pain and
sorrow, and also the impact of another
persons behavior on ourselves. great job.
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