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Sensing


Poems without ornaments
Appear dry.
Rocky mountain without forest
Does not appeal.
Street children with torn clothes
Are not adored.
Appropriate eyes can only see.

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    thanks for this lovely entry here...


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  • wendymolly
    January 23, 2008

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    To me, this is on par with Langston Hughes or Pauli Murray or Hannah Kahn, some of the Greats! Bravo!