Somewhere out there beyond
the stars or the sea is a
lady whose seeking me
Distance is vast and time
seems to be running both
slow and fast the flow
delaying the necessary
technologies
so momentarily deprived of
our rightful desires we just
continue to simply exist
even though anonymously
which sometimes overwhelms
Author notes
I was feeling lonely and creative, when I wrote this one. But the words are true.
A contest entry
- Time and Good-byes by xBluexEyedxGirlx.
539 points, ended February 5, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this a lot. I see the lonliness you were experiencing. Great job!
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I can feel the loneliness in this. Great expression! Good luck in the contest!
Sheryl
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I liked it, the beginning reminds me of Frank Sinatra.
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