Eyes staring at nothing
Nothing
I can't face the obvious
I don't want to see what's really going on
Afraid you don't love me
Afraid you don't understand me
Afraid
That when I take my eyes off the nothingness
I'll see everything
Author notes
I'm still trying to figure out what the hell this is.
I'm not quite sure yet, but when I do, I'll get back to you on it. Sorry for the weird, suck-tastic, BEAST of a poem that I have laid before you. Just wanted to try something different. Besides, I'm impulsive. I would have written it at some point anyway. Thanks for reading.
A contest entry
- Make Me Cry by dead-love-for-fun.
600 points, ended March 1, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Contest For Teens by xTomorrowx.
750 points, ended February 3, 2008, 50 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Going for the gold by sillsill44.
300 points, ended May 10, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
SOOoOOoo....
Comments
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i really like this one. good luck
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I really like this, it's short but soo powerful...
Great choice of language, this really is great.
Thanks heaps for entering and good luck! -
wonderful
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Okay I know I said the last poem was the best one I've read by you in a while, but this is even better. I absolutely adore it. It says so little but says so much at the same time. My favorite part out of it all is:
"I can't face the obvious
I don't want to see what's really going on"
Because that is true.
About you,
about me.
About pretty much anyone who gets as ... hmm ... stubborn... I guess? As we do whenever we're set on our decisions.
Yet another brilliant write from you.
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