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Wild Heart

~To a Secret Love~

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Ah, what is one to do at times
When love whispers words incoherent?
Loudly enough to keep mine heart beating,
Softly enough to capture breathe.

'Tis mine tongue that would climb mountains
And swim oceans for sweet words to tell
Of this thunderous pounding in mine breast!
Set wild by the sight of thy affections.

Rosy cheeks and hesitant laughter betray
Courageous attempts to contain thy emotions
And whilst maintaining control before you,
It shall not tell tales of the same once we part.

Ah, what it is to feel such vigor, that thou
Would brave through all obstacles ardently
To touch, to come upon mine flesh as a flower
Awaits sunlight's touch to bloom.

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  • only1love4ever
    January 30, 2008
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    This was very affectionate, and you have taken it to a whole new level, to speak of things so sweetly, might make those non believers....believe. love is a one of a kind emotion, hard to pinpoint, but hard to decieve. It has many great strengths and so many weaknesses, but it is great, and it will wrap around you like the sea!!

  • pruedence
    January 29, 2008
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    Love is in the air...and you have captured love, lust, and love again. Well done, thanks for sharing :)

  • pruedence
    January 29, 2008
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    Love is in the air...and you have captured love, lust, and love again. Well done, thanks for sharing :)

  • pruedence
    January 29, 2008
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    Love is in the air...and you have captured love, lust, and love again. Well done, thanks for sharing :)


  • LostInTheDream
    January 28, 2008
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    Nice!

    This is great! It is so... original, and it still packs a powerful message that many can relate to! Congratulations on the honorable mention with this one, it really is an awesome write! +-MSR


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    January 26, 2008
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    i freaking loved it bunches thanks for entering and good luck sweetie

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