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Raindrops

Crystalline blood of darkened clouds
And glistening tears of radiant angels
Pour down from the gray, opaque sky.

Author notes

This is a pixiku. There are three lines, the first letter of each line is capitalized, and there is no syllable limit.

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    What a beautiful thought for this
    prompt! Congratulations to you on
    taking the Gold, a well deserved write!
    Keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


  • MidnightDreams
    May 19, 2008

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    Beautifully Inspiring

    Hi! I love the way you have expressed yourself in the short poem with such a big message. We have a TON in common. My fave band is Evanescence, and I ADORE Twilight. I really want to talk to you more. I read ur profile and saw a lot of things I like. Please reply! Sincerely, MidnightDreams PS Have you read the Maximum Ride Series? I love to read!


  • SEA angel gold member
    January 22, 2008

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    Fascinating

    What a fascinating and original way to look at dark clouds. Your ability to step out of the box has given me an epiphany of sorts today. Thank you! Now, I don't feel so boxed in and I hadn't even realized I was. Sometimes, someone has a key we need to open brand new doors of thought that we didn't even know we needed. You are a gifted and talented writer with your creative freedom abilities building new pathways of thought. THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!