Everybody has something to hide
It's an uphill battle, but I still fight
You can take everything I ever loved
I don't need it; I still have my pride
Chorus:
So I scream, "You won't beat me"
I am stronger than before
All the times you tried to break me
Now, you'll hear my voice...reclaimed
And I will never let you in again
No, I won't ever let you in again
Oh, I won't ever let you in, so don't you try
I have heard your final lie
Oh, your eyes and your smile
won't be enough to save you
From fading into my past
Chorus:
And I scream, "You won't change me"
I am smarter than before
All the times you tried to break me
Now, you'll hear my voice...reclaimed
I see through you, and I don't know you anymore
Author notes
Not done yet. I hope to add another verse and another variation of the chorus...written for an event at my school for domestic violence awareness. Hopefully I'll have it done in time :-)
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very well written.
I dont think it needs anything more done to it, the way you ended it was...simplistic.
very well done and keep writing
♥ Nov
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i like what you have so far.
after reading your author notes, the song totally fits.
i'd love to hear this with the music.
and thanx for your comment, btw ^^
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