There was once sadness which filled my vision of sorrow
Revealing words of beauty and expansion
fully visible for all to see
yet
Falling back into the darkness of loneliness
I see this within U
I feel this through your words
but Now I smile with U
smile within you
for there is happiness,joy
that thrives to surface
in your eyes
Shall I falsify this illusion?
testify against this truth?
That you are more
than what I see
and more than you
feel
is real
Author notes
You tell me If I am And I will except what you believe. thank ya.
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A contest entry
- Lie to me..... by Poetic Tasha.
850 points, ended January 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow, I so feel this poem. I've lived it!
stunning write. Stunning!
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thank you - I think a lot of us have. I'm an observer of people so pics, words, reactions I pick up on. So thanks for feeling this.
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dad i have been out of touch
but you surely made visiting
very great the deep energy
you delivered in this piece
goes in to the deep territory
of you
its gold
julia
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Thank U Julia - good to see U back
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this was beautiful, i don't know if it was truth as you don't know me....but it does fit me and perhaps from reading me you know this
i very rarely smile in pics...so your lines very much fit the situation. thanks so much for entering and taking the time to pen this brilliant piece
Tasha
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Deep
This is a very deep poem here, I think that you are telling the truth here, you see a reflection of a sadness that you once had in her eyes but both you have gotten over this bout of depression, let me know if i am wrong, for I could be, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Good luck with this I really enjoyed reading this as I do many of your poems. This really was intriguing.
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Oh my
this is amazing, so heartfelt and true feelings. I absolutely love this piece it is another favorite by you.
Good luck
ephiphany♥
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brilliant thanks for entering
i will comment further when judging later today
Tasha
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