I smile at you from across the room
And you smile back and wave
You talk and I smile your laugh loud enough to consume
I think I stare
But you just go on and on
Little do yo know I just can't hear you out there
You think I like you
Every one one likes you
But If only you knew
Knew how much I've always hated and dispised
Your cheating and your lies
I know what you do
And I will never love you
Never Again
A contest entry
- Isn't there some way to make this better?? by Forgot2Breathe.
300 points, ended February 7, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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I wasn't so sure at the beginning but reading on its great. Typo on line 5 but otherwise i really like it.
'Your cheating and your lies. I know what you do'
I can really feel that. May I ask was this written from personal experience?
Kudos
Dani
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awesome
really great
i love the hate on this inside
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