the fat man at
the circus
couldn't
bear the stares
feeding into
the frenzy of
an audience's
attention
he wondered
what was for
dinner.
Author notes
prompt: 24 words
A contest entry
- twenty four by le soir.
2400 points, ended March 13, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my prewrites by leander.
650 points, ended February 21, 2008, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well this is quite a brain-breaking poem
I absolutely loved this one!
shoving to the preliminary
Leander -
Wow ~ Ouch &



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YOU naughty poet that was
wickedly fun....as I'm sitting here munching on a taco!
lol
ears2hearyou
Kathleen: )) and sucking me in my gut too! lol




