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oxyMORON

the fat man at
the circus
couldn't
bear the stares

feeding into
the frenzy of
an audience's
attention

he wondered
what was for
dinner.


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  • leander Moderators member
    February 21, 2008

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    Well this is quite a brain-breaking poem I absolutely loved this one!
    shoving to the preliminary

    Leander


  • Naridill gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    Wow ~ Ouch &


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    YOU naughty poet that was

    wickedly fun....as I'm sitting here munching on a taco!
    lol
    ears2hearyou
    Kathleen: )) and sucking me in my gut too! lol