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La'Jara Imani Porter (Acrostic)

Lovingly you smile up. Your eyes stay
Affixed on me. I smile back. You have filled my life with much
Joy and completion. I love you very much.
Although you don’t know what love is, you feel it and
Respond to it enthusiastically. It’s no question that you were
Angel, before God sent you
Into my life. Because looking at you
Makes wanna
Altar my inner essence so that I may be worthy
Next to your angelic existence. Perhaps then
I’d be accepted into the place up above that I so long to be a
Part
Of, in spite of my offenses and flaws. With you beside me, I can differentiate
Right from wrong. I have the power
To exonerate and move on. Gazing in your eyes I feel I’m good
Enough to love, be loved and enjoy life through the smooth and
Rough times, because I have you near.

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For my daughter

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  • DoomedAngel
    January 29, 2008
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    Ya

    I dig it! SHe iz my daughter after all ya know. What else did you think would happen?


  • Da-Lyricologist
    January 21, 2008
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    really nice.... god i wish i could write acrostic style...