she kissed his
handkerchief
he pocketed
her beautiful smile
over his
heart
Author notes
prompt: napkin
12 words
A contest entry
- one hour by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 21, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely description! Great connection of kiss, smile, and heart. Very good take on the prompt, beautifully and succinctly worded!
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lapel came to my mind...such is the beauty of this whim to touch the heart...congrates on the silver orb you sweet thing...
Mal
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Nothing like a memory to last forever and this one will...beauty as always...you are so amazing with words and are surely becoming the Queen of brevity...I bow to you...I so love you and your lovely muse.
Congat's on the Silver...reads Gold to me as always...
Love,
sis
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Sweet
nuff said
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I can see why these few words won a trophy. You did a wonderful job with the prompt. The imagery is so good!!!
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A treasure well worth it in my opinion, to hold a momento of her loveliness near and dear to his heart beating stacatto beats. Very wonderfully written Honey Nut, many congratulations on the Silver shiny this was awarded.
Mouser
around the moon and across the galaxy
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this is so beautiful..congrats, I saw this one and could not think of anything for it!!...you are so creative..well done..
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This is stunningly well done dear Tam. Congratulations on this trophy. Well deserved!
fella
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thank you, sir!
you are far too kind!
xoxox
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Expressed in a way only you can do with class. Congrads on the trophy.
Love,
Amera♥
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how delicate and beautiful... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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