dirty laundry
corner cast
tissues of intolerance
drip sin
down wrinkled skin
A contest entry
- one hour by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended January 21, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fuck me, now that's imagery for ya, sounds like an old old father, regreting being a bastard to his young kids,
probably wrong but I love it,
Alex.
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A powerful image-piece that moves well beyond literal meaning. I especially like the intricate sound connections throughout--internal rhyme, alliteration--that, in spite of the line- and stanza-breaks, hold the piece tightly together. Well done.
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nicely done!
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oh my...
clever and cute cowboy is corraling cups I see...
and yet I'm still waitin' for you to lasso me...
am I a poet...or what? LOL
congrats sweetheart! very well done and so intense...
Blessings! Tammy
xoxox
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i'm working on my naughty slip knot sweety
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so intriguing and deeply thought provoking... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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