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so happy

she is so happy
she has no clue why though
nothing is the way she feels it should be
but she wants to get her happiness in
because soon everything will be wrong
she thinks one thing
but feels the other
hating whats to come
but smiling while doing that

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  • grace elizabeth
    January 23, 2008
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    this is a good poem. i'm in mrs petos class now. SAVE ME!


  • Clarabelll
    January 22, 2008
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    No do not erase it. I love it and just like erin said is about u!


  • eronrox
    January 21, 2008
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    its soo about you.

  • eronrox
    January 21, 2008

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    love it.

    haha. i get this. i like it. it's sooo you. it defines hannah. this should be your myspace page that you don't have, your face book about me. its all like i'm happy but i'm sad. and you always are. you always have a smile on the outside but secretly everything isn't that perfect. sometimes you're sick of smiling and you just look depressed, or you really hate everything. i love this hannah even if you delete it save it on a key its amazing.


    • xhappygirlforeverx
      January 21, 2008
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      haha thanks... idk if i should delete it or nawt. and yeahhh... its bout meee... yeah i guess im kinda weird cause im happy/sadish but ohh welll its funnnnnn dudeeeeee

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