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Linen Napkin


Pressing firmly
to her lips
a kiss
the maitre d’
conceals 
clandestine
evidence




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  • Melodies
    February 9, 2008

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    Now I have the evidence... You have been eating out in fine restaurants. OR, maybe you are the maitre d?? I only know Burger King. We should write about THAT! Oh, no kidding, your poem is splendid and I am jealous 'cause I can't say anything that short.


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    January 25, 2008
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    Very mysterious...well done...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 21, 2008

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    very clever and creative... Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 21, 2008
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    well done my dear bro - you nailed this one in my opp. many blessings always and more xxx