Walking
Disobeying
Biting into hell
Never regaining
My repulsive soul
A contest entry
- Quickie by February Moon.
300 points, ended January 21, 2008, 6 entries
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I found this deep and written very well indeed. A throwback to the serpent in Eden, no doubt? I like the ending of the piece. It really hits home. Well done. Keep writing.
Wayne Leon
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Thank you very much!
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This is great I like the flow of it. Good luck in the contest Dear With this. Redwing Spirit
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Thank you very much, even though i did not win. It is nice to have such great comments!
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Nicely written.
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Thank you very much!
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I love the phrase "biting into hell." Awesome.
hiraeth.
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Thank you very much!
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