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Love

Waking up with your lips apon mine
Just makes my day feel right
Your eyes burning through my heart you stare
Tell me you love me, tell me you care
Your gentle touch, calming smile
Warms my heart for more then awhile
Glistening eyes water when i say "I do"
Beautiful dress, handsome man
True love is more then I dreamed
Its the you that makes me

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  • Tirrell
    January 22, 2008
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    very nice my friend!


  • Purush
    January 21, 2008
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    BEAUTIFUL

    A GENTLE VERSE WITH SOFT BRISTLES
    ALL THE BEST IN THIS contest


  • Satan-Says
    January 21, 2008
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    awww that is sooo sweet!!!!