Stolen fruits
from open palms
with deadly consequences
lost innocence
A contest entry
- Quickie by February Moon.
300 points, ended January 21, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
An honest critique please, none of that nice crud, lol :)
Comments
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fits the picture wonderfully, good job
be well and be blessed
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Perfection, good luck!
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I loved the last line.
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Ah, thank you. For some reason I drew an absolute blank when the prompt came up which sucked.
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